So Much To Say

Say what I did

Say what I did to deserve this

I only asked for help

And you treated like an insolent whelp

You kicked me while I was down 

Buried me six feet in the ground

What you did was damnable

Turned me into this animal

Now I have all these things I want to say

But nothing is coming out 

I've lost my way

And I just want to shout 

To you I never told a lie

And this was your reply

Just stabbed me in the back 

And left nothing intact

I saw you the other day 

And I nearly cried

I felt so betrayed

I can't even describe

I had so much to say 

But nothing was coming out 

I miss you so much 

But you've lost all my trust

It all turned to rust as such

I hate the distance between you and I

But I think it's time to say goodbye

So baby, this is goodbye

Goodbye

Reviews

[Skai Rain]

This is a wonderful and very deep work of art. However, the last few lines had me worried for your safety. Are you alright?

[Dannyisawriter]

Yeah I'm fine. I'm doing my best not to think about it much but there isn't anything to worry about.

[Skai Rain]

Alright. Do your best to feel better soon.

[Dannyisawriter]

Haha will do :)

[Riley Justine]

Danny! If something happened to influence this piece message me! I want hear what happened! But it was an amazing poem. Props to you for being such an influential and impressive writer :)

[Dannyisawriter]

Thanks for the review. And I'll definitly message you about it ;)

[MomzillaNC]

Very sad and pointed lines ending a relationship. But, healthy to realize the end has come and begin to move on.

[Dannyisawriter]

Thanks for the review as always.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.