Tomorrow In a Bottle

Tomorrow In a Bottle

A Poem by Dannyisawriter
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Don't we have enough to worry about for today? Why worry about tomorrow too?

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The pains of today are coming at me full throttle 
So I'll shove tomorrow in a bottle
And I'll wait for tomorrow 
To drink from its sorrows 
So for today I'll shove tomorrow in a bottle 

© 2014 Dannyisawriter


Author's Note

Dannyisawriter
LOL so I wasn't sure where to go after that I decided to just make it a short poem (like really short)

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Its well written, BUT WHY THE COLOURS DARLING

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dannyisawriter

10 Years Ago

Haha because it looked so boring in all black. Plus it was so short I wanted something to make some .. read more
Riley Justine

10 Years Ago

oh ok makes sense. It's really good though! :)
I love the rhyme in this poem a lot and just the meaning. We all procrastinate and have problems dealing with our struggles and this poem catches this perfectly and elegantly.
Nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dannyisawriter

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
It's the nature of humankind to set worries for the "tomorrow" aside, as if they will somehow resolve themselves.

Posted 10 Years Ago


MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

True. However, I'm not sure the intent was to not plan for the life we must live. I know people who .. read more
Dannyisawriter

10 Years Ago

Well yeah I didn't mean don't plan for tomorrow! But there is a huge difference between planning and.. read more
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Very true. :D

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Added on October 10, 2014
Last Updated on October 10, 2014
Tags: tomorrow, worry, bottle, problems, pain

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Any way to use my imagination is my favorite pass time, and writing is my favorite way to express myself. I am unashamed to claim to be a Christian. And I hope that my writing will somehow be a positi.. more..

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