this one Startled my pupils.
This is such amazing poetry...the imagery here just jettisons from beginning to end.
to "finally tremble in surrender"---
yes, the writing of poetry is much like that...we have that cross to bear...and can love it or hate it, but we surely die on it.
j.
Sometimes the poet has nothing to write. he/she needs the stimulation to compose, wherever that comes from; be it the heavens or simple reality. Your images are stunning, and the poem just flows and flows...a really well- written piece.
Thank you for sharing,
Betty
this one Startled my pupils.
This is such amazing poetry...the imagery here just jettisons from beginning to end.
to "finally tremble in surrender"---
yes, the writing of poetry is much like that...we have that cross to bear...and can love it or hate it, but we surely die on it.
j.
I am a writer, poet and playwright.
All works are first drafts.
My favorite writers are: Arthur Rimbaud, William S Burroughs, Clarice Lispector, Robert Walser, Julio Cortazar, Mikhail Bulgakov,.. more..