Her

I still look for her everyday

in her playful cyber romps

her evidence splayed upon my page

in digital forget-me-nots

 

I long to tell her everything

and wear her word pearls on a string

but the words don't seem to ever come

forever trapped upon my tongue

 

for even in

her pixelized essence

I come undone

in her cyber presence

 

No one has ever moved me this way

Im hanging hard on her kick and sway

as I look for her in pockets of real

just to tell her how I feel

 

just to pick her clever locks

before the luminous signal is lost

dismissed within a persistent twist

for I doubt she knows I even exist

~DannyLynne~

Reviews

[V]

I like your choice of words, the topic and the way you structured the rhyme scheme. Some ryhming lines really cling to my mind - nice to memorize.

[V]

Though it'd even sound better if you maybe replaced "even" in the last line by "do" or sth like that. The last line seems to be a little too long to me...Other than that its a nice write.