To think! I must trust her!

I was so pissed off at someone when I wrote this. Sometimes I hate that person, even though she is supposed to "help me".

angrily ironing

one Sunday’s eve

thinking of the swine that should

take up and leave

 

swine, vile being!

seeks to aid…

making life unbearable

leaves me feeling likely to fade.

 

To fade, into

dark ditches, deep lakes

forests with trees apt to hold

nooses, my life to take!

 

At least there�"

that fire flaming kingdom,

such pugnacious pestilence

would be gone, I’d be numb.

 

But rest assured,

I’d be pleasantly numb.

Author's Note

How do you like word choice? Was my structure and punctuation effective?

Reviews

[Daniel Atkinson]

The last line reminded me of "Comfortably Numb" by Pink Floyd. x) Nice work, and excellent word choice.