Dirt

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I saw a day when I cared
Before I lost it all
A time that lacked blank stares
When I lived behind my wall
No guilt within my soul
Between the dust and tears
I lost all my control
Facing all of my fears

Headaches split my skull now
 And depression rapes my heart
I sit here and wonder how
I got tore this far apart
                                 Soon we will all be gone for good

There was life beyond this tomb
Where the stars all graced my eyes
I broke free from the womb
To hurt, destroy, and lie
Where else would I have brought myself
But straight into the dirt
I'm everything they said I'd be
Because nothing ever works

Headaches split my skull now
And depression rapes my heart
I sit here and wonder how
I got tore this far apart
                                 Soon we will all be gone for good
                                 Down this endless drain of hopelessness

Reviews

[Ruth]

When we realise there is only emptiness from birth and we are already dead, so to speak...then it can change the perspective of how we exist I think.. Another great poem love...I love your work xoxo

[BrynnaW.]

Wow.. Very sad but... I loved it! Great imagery and description! Good job! It was enjoyable to read and very well written! Good job and keep on writing!