L&D

L&D

A Poem by Danishgirl00
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Kind of a rewrite of one of my earlier pieces but in a new format.

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Life, Death, rights to both 
For some it's just a test
A test to design, define, and refine
 Always wishing for more time
Transference or not, it's a debt far too great to repay.
Struggling each and every day. 
It's a gift shall we say
The chance of fate;
Gives us an opportunity to hate.
While ordered chaos
leaves us always at a loss
A game of labeling and enabling.
What are we hoping to obtain?
Others acclaim?
Fame? 
 
Its true, Life isn't fair, 
Because we cease to care
Leaving our lives empty and bare 
As we seemingly stare into a world of disrepair. 

© 2013 Danishgirl00


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Added on July 11, 2013
Last Updated on July 11, 2013
Tags: love, death, life, fate, family, friends, mind, wish, debt

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Danishgirl00
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I'm a nice, quiet, smart, confident, and indulge in an easy going day with a book in hand and some quiet music. It's easy to do with the ENDLESS rain outside. When it comes to my writing i'm at th.. more..

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