Angels Die Twice

A short expression of passion and lust.

Angels Die Twice

 

Dear love, look into my eyes

Let me stare into that cold gaze, the frozen of blue of your sight

Not long ago you were my redemption, my salvation

My sweet beloved angel

 

Oh how crude reality is and how convincing its illusion

That never did I bother to question your lies

Angel of deception, blood, and desperation

Beautiful you are for sure and sweet is your temptation

 

Open those wings feel my lust

If hell is my destiny let me spend it by your side

A condemned couple of dreamers we are

Lost in the desires of the flesh, sinning of passion

 

 How beautiful your body, how silky is your skin

Your voice is tender soft and red as roses are you lips

Arouse me

Caress me

Angel of persuasion, seduction, and exclamation

The fire of hell within you is impossible to resist

Though I know I only prolong my damnation

 

I sacrificed these years my blood, my sweat, my tears

And how have you manipulated me and my fears

And as a puppet for pain and deception

You play your part in our frustration our depression

Be careful my love

 For angels unlike us who adore your glory, die twice

And you have already fallen once

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cynical_Art]

Amazing poem. First I want to compliment the title which was what attracted me. I perceived this as a poem of forbidden love/lust so powerful that the greatest damnation could not repel it.

[Dark Rider]

Again, I liked it. You do such a great job with the emotions, and the whole thing was great. :)

[Annie29]

This is probably the most well written thing I've ever read. Fantastic work. Great subject matter too. Even the title is so eye catchy.

[TL Boehm]

vivid writing. I've missed reading you. Like Legion I found those last two lines especially powerful.

[Legion]

I extremely love those last two lines. What a punch! As for the piece overall, it is passionate and gives great imagery between the two. My only question is what were the "lies"? Also look at the second line and consider dropping the word "of" between frozen and blue. It seems to throw off the rhythm there. Perhaps just "the frozen blue of your sight"?

[Chaos Stone]

great write, but the ending is a little clunky and could be trimmed
such as 'unlike us', might make it flow more smoothly
added to favs great write

[AndyJCash]

This is brilliant, I'm still caught onto that last line...it's great!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this dark tale of love ,lust and temptation -
Very gloomy outlook .. last couplet is really good ..

Chloe