Brilliance

Brilliance seeps through the cracks
between your teeth each time you
begin to speak.
Every thought, every desire,
every belief, they blow my mind.
Your pen bleeds knowledge
rather than mush about infantile
crushes or lifeless endings.
You are the better man whose
love I could never keep,
whose heart I could always
see but never reach.

Reviews

[zainul]

Great write.

[MIB]

Lovely work, last two lines are sad (whose heart I could always see but never reach) It's like no matter what you do, this person never sees you... I think we've all been there, well I know I have.. great work, keep it up ;)

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully done, perfect ending.