The End

A Poem by Danielle Renee

I would rather know
when you've done wrong.
I would rather let go
Instead of keeping this for long.
You can smile and wave
then walk the other way.
Those memories you can save
until my ashes blow away.

© 2012 Danielle Renee

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SlightlyOdd

i like the light honesty that seems to project from the words. You have a unique vision that makes you're words seem to light from the inside

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wolfwind

I love the smile truths that come through in your words. It is indeed far better to know and be allowed to make choices based upon fact, than be forced to live a lie.

Nice ink!
Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago

Tomislav Petricevic

Short, but powerful. I like it a lot! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm	I LOVEEEE This. SO poetic and wonderful. 100/100 Posted 12 Years Ago I LOVEEEE This. SO poetic and wonderful. 100/100 Rating /100

Distant horizons

A lot in this for such a short write. Sad, yet beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on March 8, 2012
Last Updated on March 10, 2012

Author

Danielle Renee

Houston, TX

About

I’m a troubled, Texan writer whose soul resides some place beyond New York’s state lines. I believe in tragedies, but never consider fate. I’m not a fan of romance or relationships. .. more..