Our Wordls Collided

Our worlds collided,

each one destroyed the other.

Chaos was provided 

and we began to smother.

The skies caught fire,

the buildings came after.

Flames grew higher

and ceased the laughter.

Everything fell

and turned to rubble.

All was hell,

all was trouble.

Everything we discovered

began to fade.

Our footsteps were covered,

only ashes stayed.

Reviews

[ATG]

A very cool poem. Made me think of an apocalyptic scnee. Not sure if that was the intent, but there you go. The poem itself was very well written and cativating. The overall flow of the poem was good as well.

[Lonnie Paul Johnson]

I like this poems the word flow together

[capn_bribri]

wow this was great ! i loved the flow of it the whole thing just fit together perfectly (:

[Distant horizons]

Perfect :-)