Hurt

she suffers through the pain

walkind down the lonely road

tears cascading down her eyes like rain

all the secrets lies deceit now exposed 

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

I like the way you set up that her secrets are exposed as if through her tears.
One small edit: walkind instead of walking in the second line.
quite powerful for such a small piece, I enjoyed reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to hide pain when hurt and sadness come out of us like rain. Such strength in the statements of this short poem. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote