The New Me

Just something I wrote a half a decade ago... when I was 10 basically.

There's a new me this year,

A always-at-school-on-time me,

A always-have-my-homework-in-on-time me,

A clean-desk me,

A always-remember-my-equitment me,

An always-willing-to-help-out me,

A always-listen-in-class me.

The problem is

The new me

Is not like me

At all!

Author's Note

Ignore mistakes and review please :) Thanks... I know it's awful but I need feedback :)

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

It's a new type of poem I encounter here. (honestly).
It's a poem of acceptances, understanding .
I'd be the opposite, I usually change myself to fit the new me. improve.
but I guess, what I learn from your poem is that , it is also possible to stay what you are, and be who you are , to be precise.
altho , the poem brings up an important question : should we change or not?
and the poem doesn't give an answer, it gives an emotional process. the extra (!) imply the the fear of changing or the fear of the not changing perhaps , because maybe it's hard..

anyway, very impressive for a 10 year old.

[Daniela Jamiso]

ahha lol thanks :)

[BCBates]

Really liked this poem. I can relate to it a lot which is good.

[Daniela Jamiso]

Thanks :P

[Chris]

chuckling here... welcome to WC

[Daniela Jamiso]

lol okay and thanks :) xoox

[Chris]

You were "heard" and appreciated!

[Daniela Jamiso]

ahahaha lol :)

[Elvis Gilley]

I enjoyed this poem. you chose a good subject. it has very good rhythm. you said to ignore mistakes. the only 1 I thought was the word equipment with a p.m. great job keep up the good work

[Daniela Jamiso]

work equipment with pm??? huh?! And thanks it means a lot!

[Phillitup]

LOL! This has quite the comic air to it! I love it!

Best regards, Dell

[Daniela Jamiso]

lol, I wrote it ages ago and thanks, it means a lot

[Phillitup]

:)

[Daniela Jamiso]

(: