The New Me

Just something I wrote a half a decade ago... when I was 10 basically.

There's a new me this year,

A always-at-school-on-time me,

A always-have-my-homework-in-on-time me,

A clean-desk me,

A always-remember-my-equitment me,

An always-willing-to-help-out me,

A always-listen-in-class me.

The problem is

The new me

Is not like me

At all!

Author's Note

Ignore mistakes and review please :) Thanks... I know it's awful but I need feedback :)

Reviews

[Tamara]

This is wonderful! I very much connect with it.

[Daniela Jamiso]

thanks :)

[Jeremiah Castelo De Guz..]

Such boldness in your honesty and such insight into yourself at such a young age. Very impressive Daniela. Keep writing, you have the talent :)

[Daniela Jamiso]

I've been told... thank you :) It means a lot :D

[Daniel Periera]

Wow! You have to become published, you are absolutely amazing. That? At 10 years old? Congratulations :) That is brilliant. Some people at 40 couldn't write anything as brilliant as that!

[Daniela Jamiso]

Thank you bby xxx ILY

[zainul]

I turned to a 10-older!
Wonderful and magical indeed!

[Daniela Jamiso]

haha no im 15 now but i wrote it when i was ten :D xxx thank you xxx

[zainul]

I knew from your description that you wrote at 10 y.o.
I added you you in wattpad.
You may write more poems in WC.
I prefer poem than stories.

[Daniela Jamiso]

cool :) Thanks x

[zainul]

:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

I liked this..and the other me liked it too

[Daniela Jamiso]

Ahahaha that cracked me up xx Thanks, it means a lot xx :D

[B-poet]

Your poem describes the main challenge of becoming the embodiment of a new persona. Leaving the old you behind is where it starts and finding the right fitting new you along the way is where you finish. Very well written. Nice work. :)

[Daniela Jamiso]

Thank you xx

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Nice...

[Daniela Jamiso]

:D

[Em]

i enjoyed this

[Daniela Jamiso]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the ending the most ...

[Daniela Jamiso]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Daniela Jamiso]

[London Poet]

I like the twist at the end. Very good for a 10 year old and amusing.

[Daniela Jamiso]

Thanks :)