She

this poem describes many personalities and i hope that people can relate to someone from experience or fantasy. Enjoy :)

She

She is red lipstick, crimson like blood

She is a poison, a drug you cant resist

She is a perfect rose, but deadly with a thorn

She is electric, with a fingertip connection

She is a fire, an undeniable passion

She is lust, itching for a fix

She is hate, tainting your soul

She is love, a devil in disguise

She is oblivion, you chased into Wonderland

She is darkness, from which you cant escape

She is your heart, dying with every kiss...

Author's Note

let me know what you think, i just quickly thew this one together in like 10 minutes so let me know if any improvements could be made :)

Reviews

[elizasexybeth]

sounds like someone has captured their soul. I can say ive done this with my partner so I loved reading it.

[Daniel Grant]

thank you :) im glad you enjoyed it and could relate to it

[dunnia]

"she is oblivion, you chased into wonderland"....love it

[Daniel Grant]

thank you :)

[luviva]

wow, loved the flow, the expression and wording!!
nice write en thanxx for sharing!!

[Daniel Grant]

thank you very much, it only took me 10 mins to write and im amazed that people like it so much :D glad you liked it

[}Echo{]

Wow, nice. Great right. :)

[Daniel Grant]

thank you very much :)

[}Echo{]

:)

[Tasha]

Wow, only 10 minutes, this was amazing. Such a great write.

[Daniel Grant]

it was just stuff i had in my head and i just put it into writing haha

[Daniel Grant]

thank you :)

[Tasha]

You are very welcome. You have tons of talent Daniel. Keep up the good work.

[Daniel Grant]

haha thank you i never expected all of these nice compliments

[Tasha]

you're very welcome

[Pi Cee]

I really like that last line. And all that it implies and implicates. We are so quick to give so much of ourselves away with the chance we may never get it back, or receive such worth of a soul in return.

[Daniel Grant]

thank you so much for this feedback :) you have hit the nail right on the head and that is exactly what i wanted readers to see when they read this

[Lover Of Words]

I love this nicely done :)

[Daniel Grant]

thank you very much :)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure :)