Winter's Embrace

Once again this is a song i wrote for the same band 3 years ago, however this one was never used, so now i bring it to you guys, let me know what you think :).

Winter’s Embrace

Inspiration for this song came from Killswitch Engage
Visualization for this is to be quite rhythmical but with a slightly dark edge
Verse 1 
Can you feel it?
The cold hand of death takes hold
The claws of fear scratching at your back 
You run, you hide, but your soul is under attack
Ha ha ha yeeeeeaaaaaahh!
1,2,3,4

Chorus
Fear, is the minds disgrace
Hiding in the shadows 
Feel the numbing cold on your face 
You have been taken….
By the Winters Embrace!

Verse 2 
Can you smell it?
Deep breath on your spine
Its coming for you. (your mine!)
Its there, its there, always in your mind
All riiiiiiiiiiiiight!
1,2,3,4

Instrumental 

Bridge 

Heart is pounding with every beat
Body engulfed in pain 
Lungs cease to draw breath 
One harsh blast away from death 

This is it (its time)
This is it (its here)
Your time has come! (its over now)

Solo 

Verse 3
Can you taste it?
The fowl taste of decay
You’ve been taken (Goodbye)
Open eyes glare the skies
Yeeeeeaaahh!

Chorus

Verse 4
Can you hear it?
The sound of Nirvana
Trapped in here
End of time, sinner’s crime
Noooooooo!
Winter's Embrace!

Author's Note

all criticism's are welcome, i look forward to reading any comments :)

Reviews

[The Witness]

Beautiful

[dunnia]

i enjoyed singing this to myself in my head...had to be queit theres to much people around me

[Daniel Grant]

haha glad you liked it :) thanks

[}Echo{]

Awesomeness. I love this. Greatly Epic Write! :)

[Daniel Grant]

Thank you! :D

[}Echo{]

:D

[Lover Of Words]

I am a fan of this one nicely done Daniel!

[Daniel Grant]

yay a fan haha thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

Lol my pleasure