Torn Between Lies and Love

This is actually a song i wrote roughly 3 years ago for a band that my friend was part of, they ultimately took my song and trashed it, so now i would like people to make there opinions of it. Enjoy.

Torn between Lies and Love
(Inspiration for this song came from Three Days Grace songs and Stone Sour that style and genre)

Intro verse 
Walking down this street alone 
My feet drag like lead(thoughts running through my head) 
I look…to the skies above
Torn between lies and Love…

Verse 1

This world, aint all its made out to be
Because, you aren’t here with me (where are you now) 
But in a world of liars and fakes 
I gotta do whatever it takes…(feedback or high note)

Chorus
Love and lies don’t go together 
The way we are will take us forever 
I’m being pushed! And shoved!
I am…
Torn between Lies and Love

Verse 2 
This time, it’s getting harder for me
And you, you just don’t seem to see (why can’t you see)
We’re in a place of hurt and pain
we’ll pull through once again…

(Chorus)

Bridge

This time I don’t know what to believe (woah woah)
this time I don’t know what to do (please help me see)
is it true(is it true) 
is it lies( is it lies)
Torn between Lies and… Love!

Chorus x2 

Author's Note

any criticism is welcome, feel free to say what you like, i look forward to hearing your comments

Reviews

[elizasexybeth]

very appealing the truth hurts but lies kill and to a lie to a lover is deceitful so well done in writing about that.

[Daniel Grant]

thank you very much :) i could probably do a better job of it now, saying as i have had much more experience of it since writing that :P x

[Franki Valerie]

Makes me wanna sing my a*s off! Love itt :D x

[Daniel Grant]

:O really?? thank you! :D x