Small things

Small things

A Poem by Daniel Dawes
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Walking in thought

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I'm walking in a dream,
Created by someone else,
I'm walking in a dream,
Held onto by myself,
The towers are burning,
And reflected in our eyes,
The towers are burning,
And how they fall.

But we must remember.....

Small things make a difference,
A whisper to know your there,
There's a magic in every moment,
And a love that fills the air.

I'm walking in a dream,
Created by myself,
I'm walking in a dream,
Governed by no-one else,
The clouds are clearing,
The sun begins to shine,
I've finally learnt,
To let go.

© 2014 Daniel Dawes


Author's Note

Daniel Dawes
Was originally written as a guitar song.

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And I have to ask, have you ever dreamwalked, Daniel ?


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Loved the first two lines, interesting thoughts...beautifully done :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


I was going to say this sounded like a lovely song but then I saw your notes. I was right on the money... Excellent...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...Any time...

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Added on February 23, 2014
Last Updated on February 23, 2014
Tags: Dream, Waking, Life, Letting go

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Daniel Dawes
Daniel Dawes

Totnes, Devon, United Kingdom



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I live and work in England, Devon in the beautiful town of Saltash. Started writing poetry about 8 years ago to get on paper what was floating in the void. I like writing simple poetry that people can.. more..

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