Changing

Changing

A Poem by Daniel Dawes
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Changing with the times

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Why are we not special,
Why do we see ourselves as bad,
Why can't we change the future,
Where we would not be mad.
 
It takes a simple shift,
In who we think we are,
It simply takes intention,
To shape and see the stars.
 
We see ourselves as separate,
This is where distance appears,
What can be said of consciousness,
As it shines all through the years.
 
Do you need the drivers seat,
Or can you just relax,
Just sit and watch the world go by,
Without getting caught in all the traps.

© 2014 Daniel Dawes


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Nice flow of thoughts and message, I think we are special and if given time, in time, we won't be separate anymore

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment :)
Words of wisdom and relevance...A splendid poem...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks mate :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome, mate...:).....................

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Added on February 19, 2014
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Tags: Life, Changing, Spiritual, Shift, Consciousness

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Daniel Dawes
Daniel Dawes

Totnes, Devon, United Kingdom



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I live and work in England, Devon in the beautiful town of Saltash. Started writing poetry about 8 years ago to get on paper what was floating in the void. I like writing simple poetry that people can.. more..

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