Universal play

Universal play

A Poem by Daniel Dawes
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The play of life

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The play of thought,
In an open mind,
Is a babbling brook,
In an endless sky.

An essence to be lost,
Only to be found,
Hidden in the depths,
Of a person Earth bound.

Coming together,
Pushing away,
Infinite laughter,
At the game as it's played.

It starts as one,
But soon it's two,
Only to be realized,
The end is not true.

We wait for a moment, 
In the truth that we are,
No shadows on the ground,
And a mind full of stars.

© 2014 Daniel Dawes


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You take us step by step unfolding the universal play of life. The last line is amazing." Minds full of stars"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

11 Years Ago

Cool, Thanks you very much :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).........................
Your storytelling process is amazing, outstanding and wonderfully structured. I can see the entire scene activating an inner garden of hope. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

11 Years Ago

Wow, Thanks for such a nice comment....you would probably like some of my other work :)

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Added on February 18, 2014
Last Updated on February 18, 2014
Tags: Play, Thought, Spiritual, Earth, Stars

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Daniel Dawes
Daniel Dawes

Totnes, Devon, United Kingdom



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I live and work in England, Devon in the beautiful town of Saltash. Started writing poetry about 8 years ago to get on paper what was floating in the void. I like writing simple poetry that people can.. more..

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