Opening

Opening

A Poem by Daniel Dawes
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Opening to what we are.....

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A spark in a heart, 
Total creation in the moment, 
At ease in the space, 
Fading away, open, innocence. 
  
A dance of energy from within, 
Which chases illusion, 
Now ceases, 
And stops chasing itself. 
  
A creator steps forwards, 
Known to self but no other, 
Not yet seen by a world, 
Who’s eyes are looking outwards. 
  
Everything shines, 
In the total presence, 
Of itself, 
Forever.

© 2014 Daniel Dawes


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'Which chases illusion' thats nice... you summed up our total existence right there... another great reminder to live for the moment and nothing else ... your thoughts travel the same thread as mine ... take a read 'See the Truth, Be The Truth' i think you would relate to ...

nice words thanks xx

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Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks again and I'd love to give your work a read x



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'Which chases illusion' thats nice... you summed up our total existence right there... another great reminder to live for the moment and nothing else ... your thoughts travel the same thread as mine ... take a read 'See the Truth, Be The Truth' i think you would relate to ...

nice words thanks xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks again and I'd love to give your work a read x
I like this. It only takes a spark to make a beautiful fire. very nice, keep opening to you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment.

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Added on February 14, 2014
Last Updated on February 14, 2014
Tags: Creation, Heart, Space, Energy, Presence

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Daniel Dawes
Daniel Dawes

Totnes, Devon, United Kingdom



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I live and work in England, Devon in the beautiful town of Saltash. Started writing poetry about 8 years ago to get on paper what was floating in the void. I like writing simple poetry that people can.. more..

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