Still your love exist

God loves us always but always we can't feel.

I was about to die,
but I didn't die.
That's just because
you were there.

I was about to get pain,
but I didn't get
that's just because
you were there.
I was about to fail in the trap,
but I didn't fail.
because you hold my hands
and pulled me up.
That's just because you were there.
I was about to be ashamed,
but I didn't
because you spoke through my mouth
make me proud.
All that happened
because you were there.

How great you are
That your love still exist.

 

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is amazing and beautiful. I love reading about people's relationship with God. It's incredible and quite interesting to read. I seldomly write about my relationship with him, which should definitely change. Since God's the reason I'm possessed with the talent to write. Maybe I should use my talent for a good purpose! Again, this is well-written! :) *Thumbs-up*


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Racy Daniel]

Thank you so much, you have done a very good review.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome, and you deserved it :)

[Katelyn]

This is a really sweet and heart felt poem. True love is forever. Beautiful! :)