Finding The Lost Heart

The pain will not fade,

and it will serve as my death,

such a tragic thing.

 

The sunsets won’t come,

they fix all that’s wrong with me,

such a tragic ring.

 

My heart will not beat,

I can’t know why it does not,

such a tragic hate.

 

The form takes no shape,

and false love plays tricks on me,

such a tragic plight.

 

For I can’t describe

how much I have cried for her,

such a tragic time.

 

She left only this,

the tragedy I’ve become,

such a death for me.

Reviews

[deadlysilence]

great poem. I love the way you show the readers your emotions and freely write. Your talent shows through your writing.

[Demi_LeAnne]

This is emotionally captivating! I especially like 'and false love plays tricks on me' as I am in this situation now.
I also agree with 'New Beginning's, the last paragraph IS emotionally final.
Chilling. I really love this!

[New Beginnings]

Anyone can definitely identify with this one if a they have ever had love and lost it. I like the last paragraph. Emotionally final. Welcome to WC!

[Madison A. Wright]

i enjoy this poem... its filled with emotion. Life without love makes you want to live no more.. my favorite line is

The sunsets won’t come,
they fix all that’s wrong with me,
such a tragic ring.

I can deff. feel what once mattered to you no longer does. Look fwd to reading more of you work! thanks for sharing this!