Dimensions

Just one of those moments ... ;)

 

I close my eyes

To seek your face;

A flicker of wisdom

In eternal space.

 

Beyond the walls

Of flesh and bone,

Dimensions shift;

I’m not alone.

 

Is it my eye

That draws you near? 

Or is it the sixth

That you can hear?

 

You stand in silence;

I feel you there;

Separated by nothing,

You wait.  I stare. 

Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

My take was this was about the people who we love who have passed away before us and how we still feel their presence. I absolutely love this poem as it is, but at the same time I wonder how it would sound without the third stanza. Just a "what if" presented by an old man.

Either way .... superior poem.

[Greg Skura]

A spirit guide perhaps? Nice write Dani!

[Michael X]

wow, the abstract nature of your writing strikes me as
simplicity in its finest form, a style all your own Daniella.
I really miss you around here :( when you post something new
,please let me know. :) soon please

[Sean M. Addams]

i like this piece alot ..filled with lines of passion ..kind of mysterious to me too... overall i thought you did great ... nice detail in this... a very superb job on this one!!!