Believer

Believer

A Poem by Dani California
"

Believe in your dreams

"

Beyond all limitation

Etched within the soul

Lies the reason that we are

Inspired as part of the whole

Even when faced with doubt

Vehemently we strive

Elated, we surpass expectation

Rejoicing, we arrive

© 2009 Dani California


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Yes, when we truely believe in ourselves, have faith and have a goal in hand...are passionate about it, then there are no limits, that will keep fortitude at bay, our reward is explained in your last two lines, which are my favorite lines within this acrostic. The Beetles song. "I'm a Believer" came to my mind.

Tony

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so rich, I loved your poem... thanks for those inspiring words

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Sweet i truly enjoyed your poem!!!! Thank You for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Yes, when we truely believe in ourselves, have faith and have a goal in hand...are passionate about it, then there are no limits, that will keep fortitude at bay, our reward is explained in your last two lines, which are my favorite lines within this acrostic. The Beetles song. "I'm a Believer" came to my mind.

Tony

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Nice format.

Belief in your dreams gives hope, optimism and, most importantly, the strength to carry on even when one is shrouded by clouds of adversity and uncertainty ..

Thanks for sharing this one.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

intently true dani, to believe in dreams seems all a person holds true in tentiment and what aspires as
knowledge in your words also makes perfect sense in perspective as they uplift the heart with
soulfully inspired design, the acrostic feature is an inviting doorway into the meaning,
I love how you brought the entirte scope of thought together with skill that makes the heart
feel that much better after having read your beautiful poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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