Girl, this is most fabulous. Such a subtle, soft voice, yet so powerful. I actually got chills. I heard a song just yesterday (or read a new article or something, I cannot remember), but it was talking about some of these very things. How true it is that they depend on our voices, yet may never even know that we've helped them.
Nice acrostic, too. :) It's good to see something from you again, my dear. :)
Strong truth within this piece. I'm usually not a fan of structured-esq poems, but I think you may persuade me otherwise. ^_^ Love this. It flows really well and I love how it begins and ends. Great content. And I fullheartedly agree. =)
THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR, FOR CAPTURING OUR TRUE FELINGS AND MISSION FOR PENS FOR PEACE!
ARE MEMBERSHIP IS OPEN TO EVERYONE IN THIS WORLD : FATHERS AND MOTHERS, SISTERS AND BROTHERS ALL WHO SHARE A UNITED DREAM OF WORLD PEACE AND A END TO DESPAIR THAT COVERS THIS EARTH WITH CRIMES AGAINST HUMANITY! EVERYONE CAN DO SOMETHING IN THIS WORLD, LITTLE OR SMALL TO TRY TO END THESE DESTRUCTIVE WORLD CRISIS AND TAKE A STAND FOR LIBERTY AND WORLD PEACE!
IF YOU BELEIVE IN UNITY AND WORLD PEACE, STAND UP AND RAISE YOUR VOICE LOUDLY AGAINST THE ILLS OF THIS WORLD! JOIN US TODAY, IN THIS FIGHT FOR LIBERTY AND LIFE! JOIN US ON OUR QUEST FOR WORLD PEACE! WE WILL NOT REST TILL WE UNITE THIS WORLD IN GLOBAL PEACE!
THANK YOU D... IT IS MY HONOR AND PRIVILEGE TO WORK WITH SUCH A TALENTED AND ARTISTIC POET NAD WRITER AS YOURSELF! I AM SO PROUD TO CALL YOU MY CLOSEST FRIEND AND YOU ARE TRULY A BLESSING TO ME AND TO PENS FOR PEACE! KEEP WRITING FORM YOUR SOUL FOR THE GOOD OF ALL SOULS!
YOU DID A BRILLANT JOB!
TIM
Girl, this is most fabulous. Such a subtle, soft voice, yet so powerful. I actually got chills. I heard a song just yesterday (or read a new article or something, I cannot remember), but it was talking about some of these very things. How true it is that they depend on our voices, yet may never even know that we've helped them.
Nice acrostic, too. :) It's good to see something from you again, my dear. :)
A Noiseless Patient Spiderby Walt Whitman
A noiseless patient spider,
I mark'd where on a little promontory it stood isolated,
Mark'd how to explore the vacant vast surrounding,
It launch'd fort.. more..