Moon Dance

 

  

Play, oh Sarasvati, music divine,

while we dance in the light of the moon;

as spirits ascend from mortal dreams,

singing sweet sounds of her mystical tune. 

 

Night's Titan Goddess halts her chariot,

glittering steeds are harnessed in blue;

her immortal head brightens the sky,

as ceremonial ballets ensue. 

 

Alas, Selene cries out for her lover

"awake my Prince Endymion, soon!",

while worshiping souls dance for her love;

oh fair Goddess of the magical moon.

  

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by Serendipity's poem 'Mahina' .

Reviews

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

I love this poem, Greek mythology of Selene and Prince Endymion. You have composed a superb image, but it appears you have linked in a little Hindu mythology also? I think that's wonderful...
>Play oh Sarasvati, music divine,
Many thanks for the chance to read and review. I think this is excellent writing but then, yours always is.

enchanting and mystifying
i love the mythology elements in it
great write
-ST

[RachelleB]

i love the mystical(and mythological) images in this poem...A very nice write...l

[Legion]

"It's a marvelous night for a moondance....." I had forgotten this tale. Wonderfully done. Kudos.

[Kristina]

Very well written, almost whimsical. I agree I have to read up on Greek mythology, but I liked it.

[Wondering Mind]

I will have to read the poem which inspired this awesome piece of writing! A perfect rhyme scheme, strong form and brilliant choice of words and "subjects" to weave this fine work of poetic art.

[The Viking]

This one speaks to me too. It's inspiring to see a poet here that draws their inspiration from mythology and culture instead of the incessant ramblings of their despairing pre-adolescent minds. It gives you an unseen dimension, knowing you appreciate the roots of creativity. The imagery in this poem is awesome. It takes you to a moonlit greek shore while the deity's dance and play out their own drama. Good stuff.

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY read....I use greek mythology in my writes, as well. I can go on and blab about how good your write is, but just like, I savor that feeling in the moment. Well done. ~Ev

[Lyrical Love]

This was is a wonderful write. Quite lulling for me.
~as spirits ascend from mortal dreams,
singing sweet sounds of her mystical tune.

[The Broken One]

This is simply beautiful. I could see the dance in my mind as they danced for her love. Well done.

[Angela]

Great work Dani!! But then, I always am impressed by the various creative hats that you wear. This poem has a very seductive flow to it and wonderful imagery. Excellent!