Poetry (Cinquain)

Didactic Cinquain

 

 

 

 

 

Poetry

Passionate Fashioned

Soulful Ink Spills

Musing Crafts Creative Intent

Verse

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

My first attempt at a Didactic Cinquain; rules are as follows:

11 WORDS
LINE 1. One-word title, the subject of the poem;
LINE 2. 2 adjectives describing that title;
LINE 3. 3 word phrase that gives more information about the subject;
LINE 4. 4 words describing feelings related to that subject;
LINE 5. A single word synonym or other reference for the subject from line one.

Reviews

[Anima Inspired]

I'm impressed...because I'm someone who is typically not a "form" writer...mostly because I'm pretty terrible at it...LOL You've done a very good job with this, I think...as you've managed to make it beautiful and passionate, which I find is often hard to do when you're forced to follow strict form. Nicely done!

[Michael X]

Awsome, I really think you aced the form in rule, and presents itself with a
greek feeling as well as the thought, dreamy in its manner of wisdom,
I loved this, impressive and inspiring in its lighthearted feature.

[Gandré]

I totally loved this...
Sweet small vivid poem.
amazing what few words can do...
wonderfully written.

[Antony]

You have completed and covered all that this type of writing requests and have done it well, I am not familiar with this style, but I am learning. I believe that what we write and how we present it, is how we are identified and what makes us unique and that is probably why I don't get into too many styles that may take away from the things I wish to express. We can experiment with different styles at times and I have as well, but if I see that I am unable to get my thoughts across, then I will shy away from a paritcular style. I believe it is a good practice to experiment with styles of poetry and appreciate those that look to better their knowledge, you seem to be having fun with trying new things, so you should continue.
Tony

[darkgurl]

I like this form very well said and written...Kim

[Aspiring Angel]

Very nicely done. I am probably the worst ever when it comes to any kind of form but I am so glad that you have left the rules of how this was done here. Just may have to challenge myself one of these days and try something new.

I hope that you are having a wonderful weekend.

Bye for this time,
Lesa

[Wildfleour]

I love it and the picture you chose to accompany it.

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Perfecto! Wow! Complete and direct, with a specialness that is just YOU!

I must give this a try :)

[Ocean Orchid]

An Impressive & Exceptional piece ...brief but very strong

[Angela]

Very good Dani...I'm still impressed. You always manage to pull off something spectacular.