Quintessence

 

I want to see you,

Know you,

Gaze into your eyes,

See beyond

Your protective disguise.

 

I want to feel you,

Touch you,  

Caress your face,

Safe within

Your tender embrace.

 

I want to kiss you,

Taste you,

Trace your lips,

With gentle

Loving fingertips.

 

I want to love you,

Breathe you,

Inhale your essence,

Remaining forever

Passionate quintessence.  

 

 

Reviews

[alternative_be]

"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise."
Well, you certainly are not one to judge a book by it's cover! As your poems proceeds you see the beauty whithin. This is writtten with such a loving tenderness and subtlity emerging into sensuality that the flow is flawless and ultimately passionate!

[TamiViolet]

This one is oh - so romantic. The epitome of all that is right in a relationship, purity, sincerity....chemistry... breaking down the barriers. I think it's difficult sometimes.... I'm at a loss dear, wanting to say much but....unable to do so. So many disguises to meet those we see, right? Each time I read you, I want to select certain lines that attract me, but I am beginning to realize that is is total perspective of your verse that attracts me....it's pure and honest.......hence the title.... Quite passionate indeed... Okay, now who is he??? - she smiles -
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[Bhavya Kaushik]

Hey Dani! This is beautiful...simply beautiful and so sensual!
This is really so warm and romantic...specially the closing lines as somehow they are summing up the entire feel of the poem!
Great work as always!

[Marie]

Wow. This speaks to me in ways I cannot begin to explain. Great write my friend.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Simple, yet sensual. ^^ This was incredibly romantic! I'm usually not the "romance-loving" type, but I really did like this. :) It is very much like true love, I believe.

Excellent work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood