Quintessence

 

I want to see you,

Know you,

Gaze into your eyes,

See beyond

Your protective disguise.

 

I want to feel you,

Touch you,  

Caress your face,

Safe within

Your tender embrace.

 

I want to kiss you,

Taste you,

Trace your lips,

With gentle

Loving fingertips.

 

I want to love you,

Breathe you,

Inhale your essence,

Remaining forever

Passionate quintessence.  

 

 

Reviews

[alternative_be]

"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise."
Well, you certainly are not one to judge a book by it's cover! As your poems proceeds you see the beauty whithin. This is writtten with such a loving tenderness and subtlity emerging into sensuality that the flow is flawless and ultimately passionate!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Wow, kind of similar to the fantasy poem i wrote before. It's as if he's there, but you can't quite touch him yet, and you long for him. HOW PASSIONATE!! i loved it Dani.

kena

[Angel's Lady]

I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise.

Perfectly written lines. I want exactly the same things, too. I love this and I'm putting it in my Favorites right now! Thank you, Dani, for writing this. It was simply lying inside my heart, beating, until you breathed it into life. How ever did you know? ;)

[Nely Amorim]

ahhh now this is romance...It's passionate and deep and I loved the reading of it. Immersed in desire, very simple yet that's what loving is... great write and thanks for sharing with me :)

[D. Nelson]

I love the flow of this poem and especially the last stanza. Simple, beautiful, well worded and an over all great piece.

[Mr. Lopez]

WOH! Now that is passion!!!! I wonder if he knows just how deep your love is for him?

I want to kiss you,

Taste you,

Trace your lips,

With gentle

Loving fingertips.

This was my favorite stanza, although the whole poem flowed beautifully.Really really liked it.

Mr.Lopez

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A wonderful, succinct ode that sums up desire, wanting and longing altogether in one beautiful sweep. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[lauren emily]

This is so romantic and beautifully written!
"I want to love you,
Breathe you,
Inhale your essence,
Remaining forever
Passionate quintessence."
You really have a way with words, my friend. Keep up the awesome work!
~Lauren

[The Tao of Bri]

NIIIIICE! I love this devotional longing...it is the seed of True Love~ and that is ALWAYS Fantastic...your writing prowess here brings it up even one more notch!

[Spoken]

the perfect essence of passion.. this expresses the 'desire, wanting, needing' of love so wonderfully. Very nice! Seems like your heart has taken over you lately :-)

[Justin Tobey]

Beautiful ode to the final element of nature, Quintessence. Love and spirit, both are encompassed by this piece. Excellent job. :)