Quintessence

 

I want to see you,

Know you,

Gaze into your eyes,

See beyond

Your protective disguise.

 

I want to feel you,

Touch you,  

Caress your face,

Safe within

Your tender embrace.

 

I want to kiss you,

Taste you,

Trace your lips,

With gentle

Loving fingertips.

 

I want to love you,

Breathe you,

Inhale your essence,

Remaining forever

Passionate quintessence.  

 

 

Reviews

[alternative_be]

"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise."
Well, you certainly are not one to judge a book by it's cover! As your poems proceeds you see the beauty whithin. This is writtten with such a loving tenderness and subtlity emerging into sensuality that the flow is flawless and ultimately passionate!

[Angel Veselinov]

pure fun enjoyed it great work :)

[RachelleB]

Very beautiful and th first stanza was just perfect...very moving and visual...nice write..

Rach

[ANNA]

Very Very taken in by this piece! It warms my heart! Just what I needed today..=) thanks for sharing your gifted

Much love n respect,
Anna
hugss

[Ocean Orchid]

A very romantic piece ...

"I want to see you,
Know you,
Gaze into your eyes,
See beyond
Your protective disguise." --- very well written ..

[[untitled]]

Oh so beautiful and seductive! Elegant, soft and romantic. I can't say enough good things about this. Excellent work :)

[Tony Hwilka]

Well written -- While reading I thought I was in heaven. Tony

[Poetic Injustice]

Why have I not given my kudos on this yet? Or have I and forgotten? You know us ADDers. But we are emotionally related, I can tell you that. You're just more talented than me. Write on. =0)

[The Grammar Nazi]

Wow, you do have some very good work. Both of the entries you sent me, actually made me feel what you meant to say or do, not just read it...Amazing

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

How beautifully written this is. I was reading the poem thinking how lovely it would be set to music as the lyrics of a love song. I don't know if you also have musical talent, or if you know anyone you could contact for a collaborative project.

An excellent piece of work, and I feel honoured to be allowed the opportunity to read and review