Effortlessly

 

 Effortlessly

Words flow from my fingertips,

No form or structure

To my plea,

Only emotions spilling over

In streams of ink once pure.  

 

Effortlessly

You drift through my imagery,

No lust or intent

To my thoughts,

Only curious loving prose

To you with care are sent.

 

Effortlessly

Time casts spells on loneliness,

No pain or despair

Spent while here,

Only beautifully crafted plays

For us to form and share.

 

Effortlessly

This pen moves with direction,

No dark to invite

Penned to see,

Only passionately beating hearts

Keep you in mind and plight.

 

Effortlessly, I write.

Reviews

[Amanda]

really nice, my friend....sometimes that is all it takes, just to pick up a pen and there it is.

Effortlessly
Words flow from my fingertips,
No form or structure
To my plea,
Only emotions spilling over
For all of the world to see.

this says it all...and it is so true.

great job, Dani.

Always,

Amanda oxo

[Nely Amorim]

Indeed effortlessly, like a stream of cool water... loved your words as always :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Effortlessly

"This pen moves with direction,
No dark to invite
Penned to see,
Only passionately beating hearts
Keep you in mind and plight.


Effortlessly, I write. "



Wow! This is great Dani! Very thoughtful and passionate piece of writing!
And you know when we feel emotional then I guess we does not need our pen to write them! :)
Awesome...Great working!

[Arthur Henn]

A comment of a poem, inspired by your wonderful words.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
"Night Falls"

Upon theses shoulders
Of mine
The words you write,
Flowing
Entering the souls of our minds

The love of your pen
Filled with emotions
Etched in the folds of your
Mind

Passions and desires
Fills the sea that surrounds you
Palm trees blow in the winds
Winds of change
Never leaving the warmth
Of your soul

Arthur Henn

[Poetic Injustice]

Good. Very good. =0)

[Constance]

This does seem effortless, and beautiful. :-) Very nicely penned.
I love this stanza today:
Effortlessly

Time casts spells on loneliness,

No pain or despair

Spent while here,

Only beautifully crafted plays

For us to form and share.

~ I need to remember to just let it all flow out, at the moment. Thank you for sharing this piece. Lovely.

[Belator Books]

I enjoyed the image of 'the ink once pure'. Nicely done. I rarely enjoy words repeated in poems (effortlessly), but that is just picky ol'me. I reminds me of 'the Suddenly book' in one of Gerald Durrell's hilarious novels about his family. "Suddenly, suddenly they were in each others arms, suddenly...' LOL...

[Samuel Dickens]

It is a wonderful thing when it comes effortlessly, indeed. It was effortless for me to read your smooth, flowing words. Nice work, Dani!

[These Haunted Hallways]

WoW! Nicely composed!! Like the old saying, "Just sit down at a typewriter, and open a vein," hehe. Well, that's exactly how it is and what it feels like, and you've described it beautifully here. I agree, as well, that it has a bit of romance to it, too. Wonderful job with this :)

B.A.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Excellent description of writing romantic poetry. ;) The repitition of the word "effortlessly" really gets your point across.

This poem is great! It's got phenomenal detail of emotions and your word choice is very clever and entertaining. ^^ Thank you for sharing this! It was an easy read, yet incredibly deep. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Yes sometime it is and some times we think it is but whatever it is - it is. And that is the important aspect of it. Thanks good write.