Effortlessly

 

 Effortlessly

Words flow from my fingertips,

No form or structure

To my plea,

Only emotions spilling over

In streams of ink once pure.  

 

Effortlessly

You drift through my imagery,

No lust or intent

To my thoughts,

Only curious loving prose

To you with care are sent.

 

Effortlessly

Time casts spells on loneliness,

No pain or despair

Spent while here,

Only beautifully crafted plays

For us to form and share.

 

Effortlessly

This pen moves with direction,

No dark to invite

Penned to see,

Only passionately beating hearts

Keep you in mind and plight.

 

Effortlessly, I write.

Reviews

[Amanda]

really nice, my friend....sometimes that is all it takes, just to pick up a pen and there it is.

Effortlessly
Words flow from my fingertips,
No form or structure
To my plea,
Only emotions spilling over
For all of the world to see.

this says it all...and it is so true.

great job, Dani.

Always,

Amanda oxo

[Angel's Lady]

Effortlessly, I write.
And so very deliciously eloquently, too. Great write.

[Seriana]

So pretty, Dani. It is nice to get in that "zone" when someone else inspires us to write such awesome images. And you've captured that here, and the title is absolutely perfect. I know when I write, that's exactly how it goes sometimes. Effortlessly. Truly beautiful girl!

[Abigail Alliah]

While the words seem deep and the writing perfect, sometimes that does come effortlessly.
The third verse seems a little less effortless than the rest, made me think a little about its meaning, but it doesn't hinder the poem's effect and grace. It's simple and beautiful. I love it.

[Albert Freeman]

I too write effortlessly..........for about 10 minutes then I'm distracted by my brain wondering off into goof troop land. Nice poem. It flowed effortlessly :)

[FindingMabel]

True Beauty, takes no effort. When our souls yearn to express, effortlessly we surrender to them.

Loved it! Thanks

[None]

Your poem has the expression of "Effortlessly" about it, your words seem to happen on paper as if they were destined to be there. A carefree feel to your writing, but very deep as well. I love the originality of your poem. Very beautiful!

[T]

You penned your beautiful thoughts so effortlessly ... A delightful poem indeed ... hugs

[Lunessa419]

Hi, Dani! This poem flows as "effortlessly" as its title. It resonates with me! Many times I've felt that effortless prose flow out of me and onto paper. You encapsulate the feeling...that experience....beautifully.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Effortlesslly....it's the same for me! I just to get to a piece of paper, and let it flow. Sometimes my mom is like, "how did you come up with something like that in less than five minutes? That's amazing?" (she still thinks i need to submit a book to Oprah...she sees fantasy..hee hee)

well, great job. i loved this piece...

kena

[Emily B]

This poem flows elegantly, effortlessly, effervescently. Thanks for sending it my way. . .