Here I Stand

 

Here I stand

On the edge of your pain

My heart aches for you

Bleeding on cue

Though sees not which you sustain

 

Here I stand

In the midst of your strife

I reach for your hand

Try to understand

Though know not of your life

 

Here I stand

In the realm of your existence

My love calls to you

Eternal and true

Though feels only your resistance

 

Here I stand

In the corner of your mind

My soul shadowed in place

Reveals to you its face

Though yours, I cannot find

 

Here I stand

In the center of love’s will

My heart holding on

Your resistance still strong

Though here I stand,

 

Yet still

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

Your writting always pulls at my heart strings. Educated and precise. There is a beautiful heart in you that you are not shy to share with your readers. Your poem oozes with sarrow and strength in the same brush stroke. And what a wonderful picture you paint. I love to read everything that you write. Will you sign my book when you write one?
Peace
Mr. Lopez

[Sami Khalil]

And here I stand and proclaim that you are good.

[D. Nelson]

this expressed alot of emotion, and it had a nice flow to it. great job

[Lady Lazarus.]

Here I stand
In the corner of your mind
My soul shadowed in place
Reveals to you its face
Though yours, I cannot find

made a tear come to my eye.
This poem is deep,sad but also touching.
Your way of making some words as human and beautiful as here is incredible.

[Angelic Darkness]

Sometimes, with love, just being there, no words being said
is plenty. This is a wonderful piece. You do put your heart and
soul in your work...AD

[Marie]

Wow. You're a wonderful writer. How much do your surroundings inspire you?

[Abigail Alliah]

I love the form of your writing. Its descriptions are so realistic and reaching out for my heart, begging it to sympathize. Which I do completely, from my personal longings and heartache, but also from the deepness of the language you use. The general 'here I stand' can be applied to many a situation, and the one you write of is heartrending and beautiful. It speaks volumes.

[Al]

This is the first I've read from you and defiantly not the last. It felt like I was in this poem and right when I began reading it I could place a mood or scenario. I even related it to one of my characters from a game. Very strong feeling. I love it.
-Al.

[Orlando Murcia]

Aswome job, It captured a lot of feeling's for me,
the way you wrote it was just like litererly like what
you said " Here I am " Its the exact same feeling from those
2 words, I hope you know what I mean

I have those moments at times my self
those here I am moments

Great write Dani !!

Orlando M

[Orlando Murcia]

Aswome job, It captured a lot of feeling's for me,
the way you wrote it was just like litererly like what
you said " Here I am " Its the exact same feeling from those
2 words, I hope you know what I mean

I have those moments at times my self
those here I am moments

Great write Dani !!

Orlando M

[Orlando Murcia]

Aswome job, It captured a lot of feeling's for me,
the way you wrote it was just like litererly like what
you said " Here I am " Its the exact same feeling from those
2 words, I hope you know what I mean

I have those moments at times my self
those here I am moments

Great write Dani !!

Orlando M