Forever

 

Gently

I sink into you

My once strong exterior

Now coddled like a child

Within your arms

Seemingly helpless

I am safe

 

Gradually

My heart quickens

As I feel your essence

Engulfing me

An energy like nothing else

I have ever known

Joy is home 

 

Softly

You touch my cheek

A single stroke of your hand

Sends shivers through my soul

My pulse races

As I try desperately to preserve

This moment

 

Quietly

I weep tears of joy

For the moment that I am in

And I weep tears of sorrow

For the moment that will end

I just want to lay here in your arms

Forever

Reviews

[ElJays Nicholas]

The essence of you shines in this, Dani! It reaches out and embraces us with tenderness and delight. I think, anyone who has experienced such moments can find the beauty in this and can relate to how fleeting such moments can be, and the desire to "stay like this forever." I certainly can relate :) Much love to you, beautiful lady.....

[Carole]

A beautiful love story here Dani. I might add that you are doing very good at the romantic poems. If I remember right you had said you were recently going to START writing them...You are a natural! I can feel your heart within each line and the need to run away from it all and your need and desire to stop the clock and stay in the arms of your love forever!

Quietly
I weep tears of joy
For the moment that I am in
And I weep tears of sorrow
For the moment that will end
I just want to lay here in your arms
Forever

[wizthom]

love and being loved in the act of love .
paints a picture of perfection,,such as this poetic erotic write,
worthy of being read in church :-).peace wizthom

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Dani this is too sweet. Love can be so beautiful and when you find that special one you just want to be there forever. You've done such a wonderful job in expressing that great feeling.

[Cardinal Robin]

Heh heh heh, when you come from love any words you use to tell a tale will fall in pleasant order...such as in this case, glorious whimsy and fantastic intense shimmering orgasmic energy! I have to go for a walk in the cool air now, to catch my breath...then I need a drink!

[Mr. Lopez]

Wow! Dani , Now that is love . You have a way about you that allows your readers to fully experience just how deep you feel . This poem is no exception. The last stanza brings the whole poem full circle. Absolutely beautiful ..........as has become the norm from you.

Sends shivers through my soul
My pulse races As I try desperately
to preserve This moment

Great lines !

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

nicley put

[WordMaster]

I agree with StarrynightPoet, you have created a feel that is unmistakable. Your words tell a story of love at its most tender moment of surrender.

"Now coddled like a child" and "Joy is home" are feelings that we all want the moment we our in our lovers arms.

Enjoyed each word and line, friend of mine

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Wow! This is exquisite, my friend. Simply exquisite. You have a way of capturing precious and rare emotions and weaving them into a gentle masterpiece of pure beauty.

I stand in awe.