Forever

 

Gently

I sink into you

My once strong exterior

Now coddled like a child

Within your arms

Seemingly helpless

I am safe

 

Gradually

My heart quickens

As I feel your essence

Engulfing me

An energy like nothing else

I have ever known

Joy is home 

 

Softly

You touch my cheek

A single stroke of your hand

Sends shivers through my soul

My pulse races

As I try desperately to preserve

This moment

 

Quietly

I weep tears of joy

For the moment that I am in

And I weep tears of sorrow

For the moment that will end

I just want to lay here in your arms

Forever

Reviews

[ElJays Nicholas]

The essence of you shines in this, Dani! It reaches out and embraces us with tenderness and delight. I think, anyone who has experienced such moments can find the beauty in this and can relate to how fleeting such moments can be, and the desire to "stay like this forever." I certainly can relate :) Much love to you, beautiful lady.....

[windowguy]

Superb! Full of romance and emotion.

[jen -- JG]

The gently true love that is "making love" in every sense of the word is beautiful.

This loving is so different and touches every cell in the body, the heart, mind and the very soul, to the extent that when that moment ends - it is like a sort of death- and the longing to stay longer in the pefect moment is overwhelming.

Your words capture that moment perfectly.

Cheers

jen

[Nick Erickson]

The complete abandon that comes from this poem is amazing.
I could feel the love and desire as I read through each line - over each word.

Excellent piece.
Well done!!

[Jazmyne]

wow this is the kind of stuff i like in a writting. i could feel each word...i really enjoyed this piece. havent we all wanted to "stay" in that moment..fear of losing it! very well written. thanks for sharing

[doreen cyr]

such tender and impassioned love
doreen

[Mysty Rayn]

You gave me shivers and a want to be in someones arms. Lovely.

[T]

This is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful, D! The tenderness, the passion, the love, speak volumes in this exquisite poem ... I loved it! hugs T

[Krishna]

You write with very genuine tones, as if I could bathe in the feeling of your writing.

[ABBY]

oooooh i like it...i like it alot

[imm's place]

exquisite, so enveloping and gently penned, mary