Where Souls Touch

 

A mere glimpse

Took me on a journey

Through your eyes

Whence I could see

An enchanting light

Emanating your beauty

Old fears now faded

Behind the light of courage

Old sorrow

Blissfully removed

By the light of joy

Old heartache

Cast aside

By the light of new love

Take me there

Don’t let me leave

In your heart I will lay

Please, let me stay

Forever in that place

Where truth resides

Joy is endless

Love is unmeasured

Oh how I need you

To take me there

To that wondrous place...

  

Where souls touch

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Take me there
Don't let me leave
In your heart I will lay
Please, let me stay
Forever in that place
Where truth resides
Joy is endless
Love is unmeasured
Oh how I need you
To take me there
To that wondrous place
Where souls touch

Loved it all....your words touch the deepest measure of a soul. Wonderfully written.

[*Kantola*]

This was an extremely beautiful poem. Many people have that person whose soul they can touch, and some people are lucky to have more than one. Good job on this poem! You have a wonderful choice of words that allows you to get your point across very well. Fantastic poem!

[PoetryXpressions]

Beautiful imagery placed through out this lovely poem . Found it a pleasure to read. I thank you for sharing it.

[Tara Jean Olson]

dani, this is a beautiful image.
can i make a suggestion for the title? 'when souls collide'

[Antonio Valentino]

Okay we're not talking about, like a linoleum floor or something are we, where, soles, touch?
(Okay, I need to start writng some better jokes lol).

Seriously Dani, this was really beautiful!
You are the raisin in my bran!

Rich

[Blue Sky]

oh, my, it seems you touched a chord
that embellish longing of a place that a heart yearns for,
again, a very wonderful piece
at the touch of your magic fingers
such a lovely piece!

[Angel's Lady]

Oh how very beautiful! And how beautifully written as well, visual, flowing, rhythmic...I love this piece. Oh! How touching!

[Mr. Lopez]

WOW !! Such passion and power painted with words. I love the way that you write. This is an extremely romantic poem . You must have one lucky man to give such a loving heart from a talented poet. Very loving and impressive.
Mr. Lopez