Take me there
Don't let me leave
In your heart I will lay
Please, let me stay
Forever in that place
Where truth resides
Joy is endless
Love is unmeasured
Oh how I need you
To take me there
To that wondrous place
Where souls touch
Loved it all....your words touch the deepest measure of a soul. Wonderfully written.
What wondrous strange fire has lit the kindle spark in thee? You have scorched the pearly gates with this and given bored St.Peter a bleedin' Tan! I know there is such a place, wait a moment, I'll fetch you my address, we'll want to meet for Tea when you arrive...;)))) I love this ode to love again and again and again! Beautiful Inspiration!
Such beauty, Dani. What a touching piece. I can nearly feel it, the touching of the souls, the yearning for it. Such an emotional being are you. :) Nicely done!
really sweet piece. it honestly makes me think of children, and their innocence, and how they take us places other human beings can not.
i was at a worship service today where the leaders expounded uon this fact a couple times - and even offered that the children were perhaps the center of our healing, and had healing powers, etc... because of their innocence and open loving hearts. this piece made me think of that. great job :)
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Strong impact.
It explains a lot on glimpses, stares, and such. I did not get to understand its impact until this piece.
Good form, good flow, good choice of words, well painted imagery. Very well imparted message.
Take me there
Don't let me leave
In your heart I will lay
Please, let me stay
Forever in that place
Where truth resides
Joy is endless
Love is unmeasured
Oh how I need you
To take me there
To that wondrous place
Where souls touch
Loved it all....your words touch the deepest measure of a soul. Wonderfully written.
A Noiseless Patient Spiderby Walt Whitman
A noiseless patient spider,
I mark'd where on a little promontory it stood isolated,
Mark'd how to explore the vacant vast surrounding,
It launch'd fort.. more..