Where Souls Touch

Where Souls Touch

A Poem by Dani California

 

A mere glimpse

Took me on a journey

Through your eyes

Whence I could see

An enchanting light

Emanating your beauty

Old fears now faded

Behind the light of courage

Old sorrow

Blissfully removed

By the light of joy

Old heartache

Cast aside

By the light of new love

Take me there

Don’t let me leave

In your heart I will lay

Please, let me stay

Forever in that place

Where truth resides

Joy is endless

Love is unmeasured

Oh how I need you

To take me there

To that wondrous place...

  

Where souls touch

 

© 2008 Dani California


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Take me there
Don't let me leave
In your heart I will lay
Please, let me stay
Forever in that place
Where truth resides
Joy is endless
Love is unmeasured
Oh how I need you
To take me there
To that wondrous place
Where souls touch

Loved it all....your words touch the deepest measure of a soul. Wonderfully written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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A poem steeped in light and life, beautifully stated, resonant and gentle. We so need more affirmations here at the cafe, and in life beyond the bandwidth. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An exceptionally beautiful flow to this...
It was simple and to the point, as in I really did know what I was reading as I was reading it, but at the same time very lovely and touching.
I just love the first few lines


A mere glimpse

Took me on a journey

Through your eyes



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most lovely flowing piece so beautifully penned~
THanks for sharing your words~Very nice indeed~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely write...you inspire the heart and soul with you expressions of love and hope. I know this feeling well.

I just loved this, Dani.


Always,

Amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very nice poem. I like the way the words express the love and beauty found in the soul. You are an exceptional writer. Thank you for sharing...Good work!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwwwww, another beautiful poem hun, you do have a great talant. Dawn xx

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so tender and soothing, Lovely words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful write, with beautiful flow and passion. Very nice title as well as like it ends. I would've ended it with
"where soulds embrace" but, I'm not an expert.
Thank you for sharing a wonderful piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This shows what a brilliant writers I've always known you to be... full of love and passion.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ur truly a inspirational writer

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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