Where Souls Touch

 

A mere glimpse

Took me on a journey

Through your eyes

Whence I could see

An enchanting light

Emanating your beauty

Old fears now faded

Behind the light of courage

Old sorrow

Blissfully removed

By the light of joy

Old heartache

Cast aside

By the light of new love

Take me there

Don’t let me leave

In your heart I will lay

Please, let me stay

Forever in that place

Where truth resides

Joy is endless

Love is unmeasured

Oh how I need you

To take me there

To that wondrous place...

  

Where souls touch

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Take me there
Don't let me leave
In your heart I will lay
Please, let me stay
Forever in that place
Where truth resides
Joy is endless
Love is unmeasured
Oh how I need you
To take me there
To that wondrous place
Where souls touch

Loved it all....your words touch the deepest measure of a soul. Wonderfully written.

[Liam]

This is beautiful, too, I love the end particularly. Well done!

[Cliff Rhodes]

Hi Dani,
This is a beautiful poem and well worth the time you have spent dreaming into being the right words to put on paper that come from your heart.

Love is almost like breathing in that we cannot live without it and would die if we wondered too far and also it is an endless chain attached to all of us, keeping us bound to it., so we can fly and be free.

"Old sorrow
Blissfully removed
By the light of joy"

I like this part because love brings renewing of the spirit. Peace.

[IMOGEAN]

Do you have the gift of EMAPTHY? It would seem so, by the looks of this piece. To really love another you must feel them. Sometimes feeling another is painful, somtimes it is the most beautiful thing you can ever experiance...

Thank you for this...

God Bless
Imogean~

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

this was beautiful!! i loved everything about it!!! this is another magnificent piece from you!!

awesome!

~may

[Brette Medb]

The last two lines packed one hell of an emotional punch. I'm not much for love poems or really anything about love, it's never been my style but I liked this one. Where souls touch just seems like an almost unattainable place of power and peace, I liked the idea. Great write.


Brette

[Windy]

that wonderous place where souls touch..how beautiful. the whole poem flows so well and the words seem perfectly placed. the meaning and feeling are truly deeply felt. another super job.

[Brandon M. Whittaker]

My eyes were...glued to the screen on this one...I just...wow. This is one of those poems, that gives me a vision of the purest love, when one is with their lover everything just...goes away, everything except that significant other. Beautiful.

[Catrinka]

this piece has such a great and etheral flow - and I love your phrasing - "where souls touch", simply divine!
Very nicely done my friend! I always get such a peaceful feeling reading your work - that's a gift you give to your readers.

[lucid]

i loved this Dani, i love your writing style as well

[Cylis Derrens]

Beautiful and hopeful. What a great write! You capture the essence of love and romance. What we all aspire to experience.