Your Words

 

 

 

 

Your words

 

Ageless 

Faceless

Captivate me

Entrance me

Imprison my mind

Steal my heart

Hidden meanings

Not really there

Hearing thoughts

Never said

Notions of love

Undefined

Space and time 

Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Craving

Needing

Reading

More of 

 

Your words

Author's Note

Random thought...

Reviews

[Blue Sky]

random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered


Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Needing

Reading more of



Your words

...excellent piece that just

undefined space and time

altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!

[jen]

I really like this, can connect with it. Sometimes the stuff that spills out of thin air is best... I think :)

[Wildfleour]

I'm digging this, Dani. Remember - nothing is completely random, my friend.

[Antonio Valentino]

All of the poems yet, and ever, to be written are in thin air.
The trick is knowing how to reach up and grab em.

All I can say about this one you caught Dani
is that it was just beautiful!

Keep taking walks in those balmy breezes.
Rich

[Enigma]

WOW!! This was awesome!! So succint, so entrancing. I enjoyed it throughly... The bit of rhyming in the middle was icing on the cake...
Very well done!!!....^_^

[Angel's Lady]

Wow. Nicely done! I get this implicitly! Beautifully written! Great job! Author, author!