Your Words

Your Words

A Poem by Dani California

 

 

 

 

Your words

 

Ageless 

Faceless

Captivate me

Entrance me

Imprison my mind

Steal my heart

Hidden meanings

Not really there

Hearing thoughts

Never said

Notions of love

Undefined

Space and time 

Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Craving

Needing

Reading

More of 

 

Your words

© 2008 Dani California


Author's Note

Dani California
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random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered


Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Needing

Reading more of



Your words

...excellent piece that just

undefined space and time

altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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a nice write...and sometimes i feel this way when i read other people's works. other words that can be used are mesmerizing and seductive..a lot of writes and stories do just that.

good job, my friend :)

A

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Random spill?? This is really good. Not "wordy" yet every word says something. good job

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! I agree this is purely random but on the other hand it's so deep and thoughtful...

"Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of


Your words" This one really left me thinking!

Brilliant effort, Great write
:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I imagined so many different scenarios into which this could fit. Great descriptions of "Your words". Lovely...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, it's kind of a blank slate where anyone can project themselves into it. Who wouldn't want to be this dynamic! Nice write! minimal and enjoyable!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH MY!!! Has some one gotten your attention enough to spir such creation ? Or is this truly a rant ? Either way, you have a "California Cool" poem here. Powerful and to the point. I loved it !!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is exactly how I feel when I talk to my Jido (grandpa)! Only occasionally, we come across those special people who can completely entrance us, without even trying. Good job! : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a beautiful poem, even though it was random :P I have random spills all the time, dont worry!
I absolutely adored the way that you worded this poem. At first it's defining "your words", then it's talking about how you feel about "your words." Wonderful transition from both. I liked what you did with this :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant... it's great how certain writers can appeal to something deep inside that we can't get enough of there work... you said it best.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered


Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Needing

Reading more of



Your words

...excellent piece that just

undefined space and time

altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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