Your Words
A Poem by
Dani California
Your words
Ageless
Faceless
Captivate me
Entrance me
Imprison my mind
Steal my heart
Hidden meanings
Not really there
Hearing thoughts
Never said
Notions of love
Undefined
Space and time
Are you really there?
I often wonder
And yet still
I find myself
Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Craving
Needing
Reading
More of
Your words
© 2008 Dani California
Author's Note
Random thought...
Featured Review
random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered
Are you really there?
I often wonder
And yet still
I find myself
Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of
Your words
...excellent piece that just
undefined space and time
altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
a nice write...and sometimes i feel this way when i read other people's works. other words that can be used are mesmerizing and seductive..a lot of writes and stories do just that.
good job, my friend :)
A
Posted 16 Years Ago
a nice write...and sometimes i feel this way when i read other people's works. other words that can be used are mesmerizing and seductive..a lot of writes and stories do just that.
good job, my friend :)
A
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Random spill?? This is really good. Not "wordy" yet every word says something. good job
Posted 16 Years Ago
Random spill?? This is really good. Not "wordy" yet every word says something. good job
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Yes! I agree this is purely random but on the other hand it's so deep and thoughtful...
"Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of
Your words" This one really left me thinking!
Brilliant effort, Great write
:)
Posted 16 Years Ago
Yes! I agree this is purely random but on the other hand it's so deep and thoughtful...
"Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of
Your words" This one really left me thinking!
Brilliant effort, Great write
:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I imagined so many different scenarios into which this could fit. Great descriptions of "Your words". Lovely...
Posted 16 Years Ago
I imagined so many different scenarios into which this could fit. Great descriptions of "Your words". Lovely...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like it, it's kind of a blank slate where anyone can project themselves into it. Who wouldn't want to be this dynamic! Nice write! minimal and enjoyable!
Posted 16 Years Ago
I like it, it's kind of a blank slate where anyone can project themselves into it. Who wouldn't want to be this dynamic! Nice write! minimal and enjoyable!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
OH MY!!! Has some one gotten your attention enough to spir such creation ? Or is this truly a rant ? Either way, you have a "California Cool" poem here. Powerful and to the point. I loved it !!
Posted 16 Years Ago
OH MY!!! Has some one gotten your attention enough to spir such creation ? Or is this truly a rant ? Either way, you have a "California Cool" poem here. Powerful and to the point. I loved it !!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is exactly how I feel when I talk to my Jido (grandpa)! Only occasionally, we come across those special people who can completely entrance us, without even trying. Good job! : )
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is exactly how I feel when I talk to my Jido (grandpa)! Only occasionally, we come across those special people who can completely entrance us, without even trying. Good job! : )
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This was a beautiful poem, even though it was random :P I have random spills all the time, dont worry!
I absolutely adored the way that you worded this poem. At first it's defining "your words", then it's talking about how you feel about "your words." Wonderful transition from both. I liked what you did with this :)
Posted 16 Years Ago
This was a beautiful poem, even though it was random :P I have random spills all the time, dont worry!
I absolutely adored the way that you worded this poem. At first it's defining "your words", then it's talking about how you feel about "your words." Wonderful transition from both. I liked what you did with this :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Brilliant... it's great how certain writers can appeal to something deep inside that we can't get enough of there work... you said it best.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Brilliant... it's great how certain writers can appeal to something deep inside that we can't get enough of there work... you said it best.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered
Are you really there?
I often wonder
And yet still
I find myself
Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of
Your words
...excellent piece that just
undefined space and time
altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered
Are you really there?
I often wonder
And yet still
I find myself
Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of
Your words
...excellent piece that just
undefined space and time
altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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