Random or not...this was very keenly wrought! I love the way that the words just seem to fall across the page (or screen), like random raindrops that still have a distinct sense of cohesion. Wonderfully written!
I feel this way about so much of the writing I read here. You captured the thoughts I could not and wrote it down with such beauty. I love to sit here for hours and just read and wonder. This is now a fav. Really great.
This is great! All the words and phrases that you used were very powerful.
"Are you really there?
I often wonder
And yet still
I find myself
Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Craving
Needing
Reading
More of
Your words"
Sometimes random thoughts can turn out to be great poems or stories! :)
Awesome work,
~Lauren
"Hidden meanings
Not really there
Hearing thoughts
Never said
Notions of love
Undefined
Space and time"
These particular lines reached out and grabbed me. It's amazing how much stock and faith "lovers of prose" put into words. It's so easy to mold words, either read or spoken, into what we want to them to be, regardless of the intended meaning. I am so guilty of this. And . . . I completely relate to this poem.
Honest, touching and brave. Powerful and direct. Yet, a distinct gentleness flows through "your words".
All this, and more, makes you the magnificent poetess that you are!
This is great. I love the way you have captured the emotion of being caught up in someone's writing to the point where you are totally captivated by it to the point where you might imagine a relationship or crave one where there really is none. I can really relate to this and I love it. Wonderful piece of writing!
so within a poem of basiclly 1 to 2 word lines, you keep a consitentcy in subject matter flowing from one line to the next.
snap snap my dear.
notions of love, undefined. amen.
our quest for knowledge, companionship, identfiability, and answers leave me addicted, wanting, seeking, cravining, needing, and reading more of your words.
A Noiseless Patient Spiderby Walt Whitman
A noiseless patient spider,
I mark'd where on a little promontory it stood isolated,
Mark'd how to explore the vacant vast surrounding,
It launch'd fort.. more..