A Moment

 

 

 

My heart aches

For a moment

 

A moment 

A mere flicker

In this vastness

Of endless time

 

A moment

To know you

To touch you

To feel you

 

A moment

To see the twinkle

Of love in your eyes

When you look at me

 

A moment

To feel the softness

Of your lips

Pressed gently against mine

 

A moment

To hear your heart

Softly beating love's melody

As it intertwines with my own

 

A moment

To spend a sprinkle

Of eternity

In your arms

 

A moment

When everything

That ever existed

Finally makes sense

 

A moment

When passing stardust

Erases all time

Past, present and future

 

A moment

When the only thing left

And the only thing

That ever truly mattered

 

Was this moment

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

this was amazing!! it was romantic and heart warming at the same time!!! things can change in just one moment, or you can be filled with more passion than imaginable. This was just so touching...

A moment
When the only thing left
And the only thing
That ever truly mattered

Was this moment

that was when i felt like i was in the moment the most...it started good and ended great!!!!

keep writing!!

~may

[Adela Muresan]

How sweet. An eternity in a moment.

Because that is what love is, an eternity.

The spark of love is very well illustrated ,and you did a good job by presenting the verses is italic to.

A.M.

[T.C. Vulpes]

I don't quiet know why but the first thing that sprung into my mind when reading this was "Who Wants to Live Forever" by Queen. That perfect moment is all any of us can ever hope for. That single experience is the difference between emptiness and fulfillment.

Bravo, I love your ability to express. This one struck a chord with me.

[Seriana]

Awwww, such sweetness Dani. This warmed my heart. Truly a deep emotional person are you. This was full of tenderness and wanting. And never forgetting. Such a lovely write. :)

[shinybluestars03]

Beautiful poem
what a way to say
exactly what im feeling right now.
I do wish for that moment
to come along soon.
Thank you so much
for sharing :)
Best wishes