A Moment

 

 

 

My heart aches

For a moment

 

A moment 

A mere flicker

In this vastness

Of endless time

 

A moment

To know you

To touch you

To feel you

 

A moment

To see the twinkle

Of love in your eyes

When you look at me

 

A moment

To feel the softness

Of your lips

Pressed gently against mine

 

A moment

To hear your heart

Softly beating love's melody

As it intertwines with my own

 

A moment

To spend a sprinkle

Of eternity

In your arms

 

A moment

When everything

That ever existed

Finally makes sense

 

A moment

When passing stardust

Erases all time

Past, present and future

 

A moment

When the only thing left

And the only thing

That ever truly mattered

 

Was this moment

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

this was amazing!! it was romantic and heart warming at the same time!!! things can change in just one moment, or you can be filled with more passion than imaginable. This was just so touching...

A moment
When the only thing left
And the only thing
That ever truly mattered

Was this moment

that was when i felt like i was in the moment the most...it started good and ended great!!!!

keep writing!!

~may

[she makes me weird]

Ah, how the beauty eminates out of your words. This is a wonderful write. Delicately expressed and so emotional. Fabulous write!

[Wildfleour]

Ah, Dani - Many of us search for that "moment". I hope we find it! :)

[Mr. Lopez]

How perfect is this beautiful, beautiful poem . I love the way you voice the true meaning of life. To live this one perfect moment in time , when all elese falls away. The whole world means nothing without this moment. You feed this hungry reader with such beautiful poetry. Thank you for this great poem.

[James K. Blaylock]

This one's really magical, such beauty.

jkb

[Tara Jean Olson]

aaahhhh, gorgeous. the poem suggests that a form of love is involved in that beautiful moment.
it is the young, who retain a capacity to express love so readily (the momentous expression)

[Catrinka]

I really like the simplistic style of this piece Dani! You picked a great topic to expound upon; it's the moments that makes up our lives, so true. Nice job!

[Antonio Valentino]

"A moment
A mere flicker
In this vastness
Of endless time

A moment
When passing stardust
Erases all time
Past, present and future

A moment
When the only thing left
And the only thing
That ever truly mattered
Was this moment"

To me, the verses above, made it sound like the, moment, was actually a lifetime, relative to the vastness of space time. Either way, it has always been the anticipation of, the moments, that drive and inspire us to dream, and create, and, it is these same special occasions that help to define our contentedness, and, in many ways, who we are.

Loved this Dani!
Rich

[wizthom]

u would have to invite me to read a moment,
u are such a gifted writer till u can find and touch a masters weakness,passion
you are growing with insights of true emotion and that what sells books,peace wizthom

[Angel's Lady]

Oh man! This is perfect! What a great poem! Love this! Yes indeed. Putting it in my Favorites where it belongs...Thank you for sharing.

[Jenny Davis]

Awww! Wow, this is gorgeous, sweetie...I loved so many of the lines but this one stuck out for me:
"A moment

To spend a sprinkle

Of eternity

In your arms".....................Just beautiful :)