CRAYONS

 

 

 

I picked up a crayon

And scribbled a bit

This blank piece of paper

Had new purpose to it 

 

I picked up another

And scribbled some more 

Its meaning grew deeper 

So the more I explored  

 

I continued through the box

Picking one crayon at a time

Then adding more color

To this masterpiece of mine

 

A pinch of blue

A dabble of green

I litte bit of red

Every color was seen

 

Each and every color

Gently blended and entwined

Painted the color of love

On the hearts

 

Of mankind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

yes this is nice ,as i see it ,writing adds a color with each word you say until at the end with so many words there is a great writing imaging a very nice cored peace of imagination ,with the words or the color blending so nicely to put out a great piece as if you have just finished a painting rather than a drawing ,very nice ly done

[jmt8921]

It makes me want to color... Lol. Prettyness.

[Nely Amorim]

I loved the simplicity of the colors and the final message. thanks for sharing. Life is colorful indeed!

[victoria]

+that is absolutely beautiful.

[lauren emily]

"Each and every color
Gently blended and entwined
Painted the color of love
On the hearts
Of mankind"

Those are some powerful words! I love the way everything ties together and has deeper meaning..Very wonderful poem!

[AubreyJade]

Sweet! Reminds me of how I get with a brand new, unopened box of crayons......Or a fresh piece of construction paper.....=)

[Bree]

Awww it sounds like something an innocent child would say. It truly brings out the love and respect of colour to your heart, doesnt it?

[Albert Freeman]

Now this is nicely done and very creative use of colors to reinforce the theme of your poetry. Well done!

[Ralphy]

wow very poetic and creative. I'm impressed with the visionary effects as they accent the words and the cleaver approach at he end to serenade black type.Out standing

[Cliff Rhodes]

I can just say that it is very beautiful and tugs on the heart and the artist in me.

[Brette Medb]

This was sweet and had a childish innocence to it which was nice. The use of colors went nicely with it as well. A wonderfully light poem.

Brette