Fingertips

They run

  Gently, softly

    Down the back of my neck

      ....my spine

        ....my soul

Titillating my every sense

 

Such engulfing pleasure

  Begging to continue

    Please

      ....just stay

        ....a little longer

As my soul connects with yours

 

You pour into me

    Like water

      Gliding gently down a creek

        ....releasing all pain

          ....all sorrow

Leaving behind a blissful calm

          ....pleasure, peace

            ....love

 

Oh how I long for 

  The caress

   The touch  

      ....of your  

        .... fingertips.

 

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Oh, snap! Nicely done, Dani...tickling my spine with your words...I felt this. Great write. *shivers*

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

As usual a great write, Nice and juicey I mean these first lines
They run

Gently, softly

Down the back of my neck

....my spine

....my soul

Titillating my every sense


Huh! I'll keep it private what they did to me.

[Pikkakard]

I like the layout of this as much as I liked the beautiful poem.

You really led me through the poem, just as you created the

imagery of those fingertip dancing over a (your) body.

Wonderful!

[vanishing]

Truly like I read this for the first time
Consuming passionate flowing
my head feels swimmy after reading
a true drowing in desire,
loved the titalating imagery
beautiful-soul inspired writing
purely sensuous--timeless

[Forest Green]

Very nice, titillating poem. Pleasantly phrased look at the sensuality of fingertips.

Nice work...!

Daniel

[vanishing]

Wow, this is sensual! and surely speaks to and tantalize the heart, tantalyzing, Passionate!
The appearence alone is art!
thanks for sharing such talent

Best Regards

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ohhhh Wow... what a very romantic and sexy piece... sometimes all it takes is the touch of the one we love to bring our chaotic world back into focus... I love the way you express those blissful moments.