Soul Mate

I feel you near me
Though you are far. 
Your spirit has connected
To my very own
Drawing me to you
With such intense force
Yet so softly, so unknowingly.
It is not about lust
But about an inner beauty
A wisdom and insight I have found in no other. 
We see the same suffering
Feel the same pain
Experience the same sorrow, defeat
Yet know the same hope
Long for the same outcome.
Outside of the box I have stepped
And found you
Waiting without knowing.
A connection unlike any other
I have known before
An admiration so deep
A love that cannot be defined
Or explained in average terms.
Into my mind, my soul, my very being
You have traveled
So gently yet forcefully
You have become a part of me.
I want to be near you
I want to listen, see
Breathe in your very being
Watch you grow
Rejoice in your accomplishments
In your happiness
Feel your pain
Taking it on as my own.
To remain forever
With deep affection
With love and respect
With admiration and joy
We walk together
To overcome the hurdles
Conquer all battles
To achieve our dreams
As one spirit
One force
One Love. 
 

Author's Note

One Love...

Reviews

[Antony]

Dani, this speaks volumes, you are a deep person, your words coming from your heart, this says so much about your character, this would truely be the perfect relationship, to have and to share such feelings. this is a very good piece. I'm in awe of this.
Antony

[Poetic Injustice]

Fantastically formed. Wonderfully rendered. Creatively derived. Touchingly inspired. Redundantly critiqued (by me). I salute you again, great Dani. Your talent keeps me humble.

[Mr. Lopez]

This is such an awesome writing. You define the true meaning of love and unity between man and woman. What is most important...a connection that makes 1+1=1. Really nice work.

[vanishing]

I want to be near you
I want to listen, see
Breathe in your very being"

You are passionate by the very definition
I really enjoy how this writing connects
with the heart of the reader,
As an ode to soul mates-in ways I believe
most people can relate to the meaning
what it is to for twin flames to burn as one
Brilliantly touching
Beautiful

[vanishing]

Dani
this is absolutely beautifully passsionate
-yan ode to longing lovers fair
spoken with truth and sincerety
speaks valumes

Very beautiful! I loved your words! The line, A wisdom and insight I have found in no other, is incredible! Its very deep. Very good piece of poetry!

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Dani, this is wonderful and beautiful, to feel and enfold someone beyond the physical - on a level of sprital, to feel someone because you are in tune to thier soul, there is'nt a connection on any other level that can compare to this. you are amazing writer - just wonderful

[Cylis Derrens]

A grand poem that speaks of the ideal love.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A very deep and meaningful piece....a deeper sense of love, feeling that run deep and powerful. A wonderful write!

[Jessica L Auster]

This was simply beautiful, amazing, and made me feel happy. I felt like I should read it at my wedding or something. =]