Unintended

Spoken word

Spinning in circles, going nowhere; jumping hurdles; gasping for air; seeking answers; not what it seems; empty promises; shattered dreams; careless whispers; racing minds; slow down a minute, you're going blind; things that matter, things that don't; people who'll care, people who won't; giving love, finding hate; hold my heart but please don't break; searching for truth; telling lies; lovers laugh; loneliness cries; counting good deeds; subtracting sins; keeping score; no one wins; pain filled moments; stolen breaths; longing for shelter; inching toward death; a loving touch; a long embrace; kissing lips; where is this place; hand to mouth; unattainable wealth; incurable disease; poor mental health; winners and losers; predators and prey...

 

I truly don't believe God intended it this way. 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tania Leigh]

Dani, I've got to agree with my sister that the flow of this is excellent -- it is such a smooth read that develops a nice fast pace. You have some excellent phrasing here, and it easily causes the mind to ponder many things....a truly great piece.

[Lorna Lee]

Reading this feels almost like you were inside my head. If you could read my thoughts I honestly think it would come out much like this piece did. I can see how anyone that reads this could easily find something in it to relate to.

This is intriguing...I really enjoyed it! It flowed out as I read it like I had read it 100 times before. Very nicely done.

~Lorna Lee