I Wish You Were Here

Diving beneath a river of silk and satin

My mind filled by you

Limbs tangled and breath shared

I curl up on your imprint

Surrounded by your scent

Memories running rampant

Eyes almost as dark as mine

Gazing at me with tenderness

Back arching in a stretch

I reach for what's not there

Yet I feel your whiskers

Dragging against my skin

Settling down to bed

Eyes sealed shut by bliss

Your arm wrapped around me

It almost feels real.

Reviews

[Starry Eyed]

Described really well! I enjoyed this, keep writing!

[Kat Plunkett]

;///

[Daniel Gardner]

Very good flow. Gives a gentle feeling but strong emotion.

[Marie Harrison]

Sounds dreamy to me. Nice poem. Gives me peace just reading it. Very somber and relaxing write.

[Dream Weaver]

I absolutely love this write, it just seems that you could have
added more to it. Overall though a beautiful piece...